Nice Toprock brah keep it up ! But just few thing . Try and open the move with your arms, like opening your arms on the step, toprock's gotta to be big, dance it big, add more energy and finally, try and really STEP the step ;-) . u on the good track (Y)

You have a good amount of variety in your toprock, and you manage to stay on beat for the vast majority of it, so props to you there. Nice song choice too.

A few suggestions to make it truely ill, don't take it too personally, since you're doing great for 3 weeks--

1. Keep your head up when you're toprocking, or breaking in general. Looking at your feet makes you seem apprehensive about your dancing, and it takes away a lot of the groove and attitude of your dance.

2. When doing your steps, on the actual step itself, make it more forceful. You only tap your foot on each beat. While that in itself is good in that it shows you're able to stay on beat, if you don't do it more forcefully and pause it for a split second, it loses that impact, that "oompf", ya know?

3. Loosen your upper body. By all means, never loosen it to the point where you arms are just flapping around wildly, but if you watch yourself, your spine stays in nearly the exact same position for your entire set. If you relax the tension in your upper body, I think you'll see a good amount of improvement in your style.

A'ight, keep it real, and keep on killing those beats.

Haha nice tops!! =D
Imo you need to relax your upper body a little more. But your arm movements are great though. And yes, you're lacking energy. You have to makes us feel your energy through your moves, be like, agressive lol. I don't know if you get what I mean but just keep praticing, you'll eventually have some awesome toprock =P good luck

the song is Sunrise by Fendaheads

groovy

yea i agree with Melj, its missing soe energy. but if you put some in there it would be amazing! you had some pretty sweet tricks.....and whats the name of the song, i liked it

hey you got a lot better man
it feels like its missing a little energy though
i think it would feel better if you moved around some more
keep it up

what is the name of the song?